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14 year old mom by ~avie:iconavie:



Don't tell me what to do mom
I don'tlisten to what you say
I've already taken your place
so things will go my way

I organize the bills
pay them one by one
when i should be outside
with my friends or having fun

I already did the dishes
I cleaned the house up to
so our friends could all come over
and get drunk with you

you tell me to grow up
stop acting immature
when you know I do your job
I guess your insecure

i made sure Doug did his homework
that Alex went to bed
that you took your medicine
so you wont end up dead

yea I cleaned the car
tomorrow I'll mow the lawn
but right now I'm going to the store
for a while I'll be gone

I've got to go to work now
I have bills to pay
cause your money doesn't cut it
but thats all I'm gonna say

I know that your sick
but really don't blame me
don't make me go through hell
when you leave my brothers be

I took over mom
when you slipped and fell
i threw away my life
and stepped right into hell

all my nights spent worrying
about if we're gonna eat
about what to do tomorrow
so that we're not on the street

so tell me one thing mom
how much growing up is left
I'm a fourteen year old mom,
compared to you, the best
©2004-2009 ~avie
:iconavie:

Author's Comments

wellp..to explain this i preety much run my faily, aka i take role as the mom, ive been doing so for a while, just recently turned 14 and ell yea.... anyway leave comments if you want byes ^^

EDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alright, the long lost moi here. I've moved to :iconangel-tears:

I'd like to thank everyone for still paying attention to my old stuff, it makes me smile. Truly, its made my evening. Thanks to a lovely young lady some of my old stuff was brought to my attention, and I've gone back and edited this.

Now you'll notice grammar and punctuation aren't really listened to well, I'm not huge on hindering dialect to fit grammar rules, and as far as punctuation well.. I don't like it in my poems much, its a personal (annoying personal) thing. I'll leave it at that.

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:iconvxt:
I really had to go wow reading this. You show off your poetry skill so well in this while expressing exactly what you want to and in the mood you want to, you even make it rhyme so well. Its a fav for me. :)

Its definitely hard to be so grown up so soon, but I am very proud of you. Lots of kids wont be able to handle it like that. I wish you can still be a kid though. :hug:
:iconavie:
pffft i was never kid, im not missin anything, who wans to be some idiotic rambling baffon on the side of the road randomly talking with friends and making a fool of themselves. i dont really care for alot of kids, their so immature, its actualy really embarsing to be considered one of thm. but thats just the kids i know a few of them yes, are quite mature. most remain neanderthaws *sigh* i dont belong in this age group (im just generalizing from the people i knwo no offence to other teens/kids)
:iconvxt:
Fare enough. :) Being a kid in spirit and being given the option to be one is what matters. The kind of kids you are talking about is quite annoying I know.
:iconberyc:
simply a +fav and a wonderful job at doing it.. i dont have much else to say.. ..

--
I am different. I will not change. You are normal. You are Jealous.
:iconavie:
oo thank you ^^ hrm...normally im really long winded about replying to comments from people that havent commented ina whiel...guess im not one for speakin gto day sorries byes ^^
:iconlost-soul-forever:
wow, :jawdrop: i love it, fav!!!!!!!!!

--
If you say you love me,
I will love you back,
If you hate me,
I will leave and never come back.
---------------------------------------------
love only hurts,
if the person you love,
hurts you first.
:iconavie:
lol thanks, that b my life *sigh* without school, see ya all later byes ^^
:iconlost-soul-forever:
:hug:

--
If you say you love me,
I will love you back,
If you hate me,
I will leave and never come back.
---------------------------------------------
love only hurts,
if the person you love,
hurts you first.
:iconavie:
awwi get a hug :hug: u get one to ^^

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